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The New Pony in Town: Chapter 18

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Madam Rare---

Song Note walked toward the glamorous drama queen, being the center of attention. She seemed to be talking about something that recently happened. As Song Note got closer, she noticed that she had a pit in her stomach, like she didn't want to go up to the Madam that was formally the Element of Generosity. But she pressed on toward the crowd, and she listened in on her story.

"So here i am minding my own gown business when this small black and white striped Alicorn came into my shop and robbed me of the finest costumes I had ever made! Then she tried to knock me out!" the dramatic Madam told.

"What?!" A colt said.

"We'll find the culprit Madam Rare!" Another colt said, anger flaring up.

"Oh no, darlings i'll deal with it myself, my wealth, my problem." Madam Rare said to the crowd, "Now i must freshen up a bit, if you all could leave me so i can get a glass of mineral water, i would very much appreciate it."

With that, the crowd dissolved back into the festival as the stuck up Madam trotted over to the mineral water station that was made especially for the Madams themselves. Song Note was the only pony who stayed in her place, horrified that she remembers what happened with Shadow Heart. But she sucked it up, her fear replaced with new confidence and courage, and went up to Madam Rare.

"Madam Rare?" Song Note asked.

"... Ah... refreshing... oh, yes, what can i-" the Madam started. But she stopped when she turned to face Song Note, and noticed that she wearing one of the garments she had made. "Oh darling! That dress, where ever did you get it?" the Madam restarted, taking a sudden interest in Song Note.

"Oh, I got it from your shop, Madam." Song Note said with fake politeness.

"Oh really? Well, it certainly is a wonderful color on you... dark blue and light blue... you really look good in blue." the greedy Madam said, with a smile.

"Oh thank you."

"Oh! Idea! How about you come back with me to Las Pegas?! I'll show you my gown collection in my second home there! Come on!" Madam Rare said, grabbing Song Note's hoof and making their way to a Canterlot Chariot. "Sirs, take me and my guest to Las Pegas, and step on it!"

"Um... no it's okay, i'll just enjoy the festival and..."

"Oh no you don't, I want to show you them, i won't take no for an answer!" Madam Rare said as the Chariot took off toward the West of Ponyville. But the greed-consumed gears were turning in Madam Rare's head.

"I'll take her to my second home, and then i will take her dress to be all mine, she will never wear those regal blue colors again! HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Madam Rare thought as they got closer. Song Note had an idea of what was in store, and she was ready.

Madam Apple---

"Here you are, get a tasty Apple Fritter here! Hot and fresh out of the fryer! All it will cost you is 3 bits! Oh hello sir! Would you like an apple frit-" the country Madam asked turning toward Big Mac. She stopped when she looked at him.

"H-Hey, you look familiar... Nah... but you sure do look like him..." Madam Apple said.

"Like who?" Big Mac asked.

"Like my Big brother... i don't know what happened to him..." Madam Apple said, tearing up. "I miss him..."

Big Mac hated to see her sister cry, but he stayed strong.

"I'm sorry to hear that." Big Mac said, " And yes i will take an apple fritter, please."

"Okay..." Madam Apple said, getting him an Apple Fritter.

"Thank you kindly." Big Mac said, giving her 3 bits.

"Hey... When my shift's over, do you have any place to stay? We can go over to Appleoosa, i'll give you a room there." Madam Apple suggested innocently.

Big Mac knew that face she put on, it was the face of deceiving kindness that he saw when she kicked him off the ladder. He knew better, but he had to do this in order to get his sister back.

"Thanks you even more kindly." Big Mac said.

"Great! Meet me at the train station when the festival is over."

"Alright."

Madam Apple smiled and waved as he went away. But she then smiled an evil smile. She knew it was Big Mac, she knew Big Mac's voice anywhere, and the Black Blue costume he had on didn't hide his muscles. She was giggling to herself as she continued to sell Apple Fritters like hot cakes.

As Big Mac walked away, he took a look at the Apple fritter he bought, even though it looked delicious, he didn't trust it. He threw it away and noticed Skate had went into the Town Hall.

"What is he doing?" Big Mac asked himself as he watched him go inside the dark hall.

Madam Pie---

Yoyo went forward toward the cupcake stand and toward the psycho mare who ran it. His stomach had an endless pit, like he wanted to turn around and run away. But he had to do it, for Equestria. He got to the stand to see she wasn't there, which made him paranoid, looking everywhere. But what he wasn't counting on was that she would be behind him.

"Hi!" somepony said, which made Yoyo jump alittle and look behind him. It was Madam Pie, she didn't have the crazy look, but her smile looked just as creepy.

"O-Oh, hi..." Yoyo said.

"You wanna buy some cupcakes? I made them myself!"

"Oh no, i was just passing through, see i'm..." Yoyo was thinking about a plan to get Pinkie away from being Madam Pie. He thought about his Amusement Park, then he got an idea, he just hoped it would work.

"I am a travelling Amusement Park critic and i was trying to find the most grandest Amusement Park in all of Equestria, so far, I haven't been impressed... The cotton candy is too bland, the rides aren't thrilling, and don't even get me started on the management!" Yoyo explained, getting into character.

Madam Pie's interest was sparked, "Not impressed? Have you ever been to Poney Island in Manehatten?"

"Well, i haven't been there yet..." Yoyo said.

"Oooh! you should come with me to Manehatten! I live there, do you wanna go to Poney Island with me?!" Madam Pie with a crazy look in her eye and a happy smile, but with her eyes, it looked like a psycho smile.

"Well sure, i would like that, miss um..."

"Madam Pie." Madam Pie said.

"Madam Pie, it is and will be a pleasure to accompany you." Yoyo said with a smile trying to hide the fear, and worried that she could smell fear.

"Just let me finish my shift, meet me over by Town Hall!"

"Okay, Madam Pie." Yoyo said walking away casually, happy that his plan was going accordingly. He walked past Town Hall and saw the alicorn guard looking at him as if he was wanting to go inside the hall, and was very protective of the door. Yoyo looked back and saw Big Mac looking at the guard as well.

"What's going on here?" Yoyo thought, contemplating on whether or not he should be in the middle of this stare down.

Madam Shy---

Sunshine was walking toward the Strength game where Fluttershy, or Madam Shy as she was called, was manning. Sunshine got closer and heard the things she said, he couldn't believe what he heard. He heard the words, "weakling", "stop trying", and "never gonna go far". He was appalled at the things she said, especially to the little colts and fillies who tried.

"Hahaha! Aww too bad, maybe some other time, from never!" Madam Shy had said.

"Hey, why are you discouraging that little colt?" Sunshine asked, behind her.

Madam Shy turned around and said, "Because that colt needs to see that know matter how hard he tries, he won't get it, so why encourage him?"

"Oh, well how about i try?" Sunshine asked, angry frown on his face.

"Heh, good luck, like any old stallion like you could succeed." Madam Shy downed, scoffing.

"Well how about you try first?" Sunshine asked.

"B-Because i don't want to." Madam Shy said, uneasily.

"Yeah! you try it!" The young colt said, "Unless you're chicken."

"F-Fine!" Madam Shy said, as she went towards the bell. She gave the target the greatest kick she could, and it hit the bell. "H-Ha! Take that! Now, let's see you try it!" Madam Shy boasted and said to Sunshine, sneering with pride.

"Okay." Sunshine said, walking toward the strength bell with an indifferently unamused look on his face.

"Heh, watch, he isn't gonna do anything to the bell." Madam Shy said with a sneer.

Suddenly, in one quick movement, Sunshine turned around and bucked the target so hard, that the bell was torn right off of the strength test. Madam Shy had the most surprised face on her. She was so embarrassed that she ran off.

Sunshine saw her running and dashed after her, he noticed she was going towards the Everfree Forest. He kept running before she got to her cottage, and he stopped at her door, he was tempted to go in, but something told him that he shouldn't, but he went toward the handle, opened the door, and went in...

Madam Dash---

Shadow Heart went toward Rainbowdash who was selling tickets to everypony. When everypony had went inside to see the races, Madam Dash, as she was called was counting the bits that she had collected, and how she knew that everypony had bet on the wrong racer. Madam Dash was giggling to herself. Shadow Heart went to the booth and stood in front.

"Madam Dash?" Shadow asked.

Madam Dash turned around and looked at Shadow, hiding her bag of bits. "I'm sorry, you can't make anymore bets, the race has begun." Madam Dash said.

"I actually want to know why you just conned those ponies."

"Heh, they're fools, always wanting to get rich quick, so i nudge them alittle and get their foolishly spent money on the races. Most ponies take it, and other ponies go with their gut. So in all their rush, it's them who makes the choice, not me."

"Now i know that isn't the Dash that i know."

"Yeah, that's Madam Dash to you, chump, so move along." Madam Dash said, going back to counting her money.

Shadow Heart couldn't take seeing her friend be like this so she used her magic to teleport her out of there.

"HEY! WHAT GIVES?!" Madam Dash asked.

Just then, the doors opened and angry ponies came out.

"There she is!" one pony said.

"Get her!" another pony said.

With that, Madam Dash got the bag of money and dashed back to Cloudsdale. Shadow Heart was hot on her trail, below her, was the stare down with Blitzguard and Big Mac. She kept moving to see Sunshine Star go up to Fluttershy's cottage. She stopped in the town square of Cloudsdale and looked around for Madam Dash. She then looked behind her and saw the Shadowbolts, and walking behind them was the leader herself, in an outfit with a darker color-schemed version of the rainbow, Madam Dash.

Madam Sparkle---

Skaters was face to face with the leader of the Madams herself, Madam Twilight Sparkle, or Madam Twilight. He went toward her, almost walking with her. It was a while before she spoke.

"Skate Around, take off your disguise." Twilight said as she sat down.

"Madam Twilight, you need to snap out of it, everypony needs your help to stop Discord." Skaters said.

"Stop Discord? Why would I when he gave me this power?"

"Huh?"

"We were all fools under Celestia's rule, we now see that chaos is the way of the future and the present."

"No it isn't!"

"Oh poor simple-minded Skate Around, you don't have to worry, you will see things our way soon."

Just then, there was a dark vortex that opened, trying to pull Skate in.

"What the?!" Skaters exclaimed, hanging onto a pole for dear life.

"Resistance is futile Skate Around, you will become one of us and see things our way. You will become, a Sire!" Madam Twilight said, laughing evilly.

"NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!" Skaters shouted.

With that shout, Big Mac had lunged at Blitzguard, and Blitzguard lunged at Big Mac. Yoyo, ran away just in time for them to collide. Skate Around had to find a way out, or he wouldn't live to see another friendship.
Probably the longest chapter i wrote thus far... ^^ finally! Chapter 18!

Mane Six, Elements of Harmony, Discord, Ponyville, Canterlot, Spike, Big Mac, Spitfire, and Soarin' belong to Hasbro Studios and Lauren Faust.
Skaters/Skate Around, Black Mascara, and Small Talk belongs to :iconaskskaters:
Sunshine Star belongs to :iconasksunshinestar:
Yoyo/ Midway Matt belongs to :iconyoyododo1990:
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Shadow Heart belongs to :icontorri-chan:
Blitzguard belongs to :iconsakuth:
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LOL Madame Shy got OWNED in that strength game! XDDD