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Evanescence: Chapter 1 part 1

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One bright day, a red hedgehog woke up from his night sleep, he got out of bed immediately, and got ready for the last day of school before Summer set in. His name, was Skaters. He was a cheerful spirit, happy, friendly, and loving. He liked to make friends and also to hang out with friends. He likes playing video games, swimming, and skating. He really was excited for the last day, because, he could hang out with his friends all school day, while staying in their favorite hang out spot, the huge cherry tree in the Quad. The teacher wouldn't care because they were busy getting their room decor put away.

"I can't wait to see everyone!" Skaters said, as he put on his favorite outfit and his favorite shoes that turn into skates. "Oh, i wonder if big bro is awake..." He wondered, and he went up to his big bro's room door and opened the door, and saw him asleep.

His big brother, was named Raze. He is a very reliable, and caring big brother to Skaters. He likes to help Skaters out, and he gives out the best advice. Skaters looks up to Raze as a father figure, because their father is sick, with an unknown disease, Raze is also one of Skaters' best friends.

Skaters saw his big brother sleeping, and thought that his alarm didn't go off. He went over to the bed, and shook Raze to wake him up. Raze turned in his sleep and didn't wake up. Skaters, knew he had to take action. He poked Raze's side and kept poking to try and wake him up. Raze swat at Skaters' hand and went back to sleep.

"Fine... you leave me no choice..." Skaters warned as he pounced on Raze's bed and began tickling him everywhere.

"WHAT THAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SKAHAHAHATERS!?!" Raze laughed out.

"It's time to get up!" Skaters said, as he stopped tickling, and got off his bed. "I tried to wake you, but you left me no other choice... sorry..."

"You could have jostled me awake..." Raze said, surprised after the tickle attack.

"I know you don't like to be jostled awake," Skaters said, "Well, it's time to go to school!"

"I'm a senior..." Raze said.

"Yeah, but i want you to hang out with my friends, and we are going to be juniors."

"Sigh... alright... just let me get ready..." Raze said as he got out of bed and got dressed.

After acouple of minutes, they had gotten their breakfast, and headed out the door, and to the school building. Skaters was skating along with Raze, who was riding his bike. Skaters was happy to go to the school building to hang out with his friends. It was gonna be the last time they hang out before Summer vacation, so he wanted it to be a special hang out day. Little did they know, they would have a summer vacation to remember.
^^ Evanescence, Chapter 1: A Summer's Beginning
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I love evanescence, there my favorite band of all time 😋😄😄😄😄😊😊☺☺😁😆😆👍✌❤❤❤